Talk:Micah Joseph Lebensohn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC) Nominator: Ploni (talk · contribs) at 13:51, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

I'll attempt to review this. Comments soon. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Mention in the prose the date of his birth and death.
 * In the biography section, we start by writing about his teenage: As a teenager, Lebensohn, ..., then we move back to age 12,and began to translate poetry into Hebrew at the age of twelve ..., then back to teenage: At the age of sixteen he.... Make it chronological.
 * By the late 1840s, Lebensohn discovered the first symptoms of tuberculosis. – Not sure what "first symptom" is. Better to write it as "early symptoms of tuberculosis"
 * he attended the philosphy lectures of Schelling at the university – Is it a typo, or you intended to write is as "philosphy", not "philosophy". Also, suggesting to rephrase as "he attended the philosphy/philosophy lectures of Schelling at the Humboldt University of Berlin"
 * 'Prayer, Daughter of Hearts.' – full stop outside the single quotation (MOS:QUOTEMARKS) Please correct me if I am wrong
 * among other works. – Ref 5 should be before 11.
 * on the death of M. A. Günzburg. – Same as above. 7 should be before 11.
 * In the Jewish Encyclopedia (1904), Herman Rosenthal and Peter Wiernik [Wikidata] write that – "[...] wrote that"
 * File:Micha Josef Lebensohn.jpg – How can we claim that the author died 70 years ago, when we don't know who the author is? When was it first published.
 * Rest seems fine. Nice work! Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:50, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback! I've made the suggested improvements. –Ploni (talk) 15:58, 26 October 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! Happy to pass then. Good work! Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:08, 26 October 2021 (UTC)