Talk:Michael Broggie

Tone
This article reads like a PR autobiography. I've removed much of the nonessential details but it probably still could use some work to soften the reverential tone. Also, note that the edit history contains multiple edits by a user who presumably is Broggie himself. &mdash;Whoville (talk) 18:43, 31 December 2008 (UTC)
 * A closer look at the article's edit history shows that virtually every edit appears to be autobiographical or at the very least contributed by someone close to Broggie, raising concerns about autobiography and conflict of interest. &#151;Whoville (talk) 19:22, 31 December 2008 (UTC)