Talk:Michael Bruno (entrepreneur)

Promotional language
I took a pass at removing some promotional language here, but I'm not sure I made enough progress to remove the warning tag yet. Unfortunately many of the article's sources are local newspapers and minor online zines that publish press releases and mildly promotional pieces, so I found it hard to separate out what's actually encyclopedic in their coverage. Maybe somebody could take another look after me? KateKabob (talk) 18:01, 25 July 2023 (UTC)