Talk:Michael Jackson's Thriller (music video)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: EditorE (talk · contribs) 15:37, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

Michael Jackson's Thriller is a great music video, and it's wikipedia article would make a great good article sooner or later, and maybe even a featured article, but as of now it doesn't appear the article is ready. Out of the "content" section, the article fails to comply with both 2(a) and (b) of the criteria, in that there are some unsourced statements, even those without the "citation needed" tag, and that the citation styles appear to be a problem with this guideline. Some other cleanup to this article also appears to be needed, such as sourcing or removing a few appears-to-be original research statements in the content section. I would suggest seeking another editor to fix up the page and to check that it meets all the rules for the criteria, than go to the Guild of Copy editors to copyedit the article, if possible. I appreciate the work thus far, but more's going to needed to be done to reach the GA status, and therefore the article's going to have to be failed until more has been done. Thank you for reading this review. 和DITOR E tails 15:37, 25 August 2013 (UTC)