Talk:Michael Kanaan

List style
The article reads like a string of notes from a police record book, detailed dates & timeline but not much prose. Unless it's meant to be that way but more than 30% of an article in list form is likely unencyclopedic and would be helped with more prose. Adjusted the side headers to look less like banner headlines. 110.33.7.43 (talk) 09:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

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