Talk:Michael VIII Palaiologos/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:34, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  07:34, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations


 * Some citations are missing and will need to be fixed. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  08:36, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
 * The needed citations have been added. 20DKB03 (talk) 21:47, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * Suggest you expand lead paragraph, perhaps to do with his diplomatic and military actions. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:44, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Although Michael won that round, suggest:
 * Although Michael avoided punishment,
 * but also improved Michael's situation from a mere usurper to a leader worth following suggest:
 * but also improved Michael's legitimacy by showing him as a competent leader.
 * again anathematized (excommunicated/shunned/cursed) Emperor, Patriarch, and Pope. suggest either removing the (excommunicated/shunned/cursed), or moving it the first usage of the word.


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:50, 22 July 2018 (UTC)