Talk:Michael Vey: The Prisoner of Cell 25

TALK discussion
Let's talk. The article looks great to me and I appreciated learning about the series. With any changes, it is important to not lose the greatness of past and current WP work! -- Charles Edwin Shipp (talk) 11:44, 17 September 2014 (UTC)

Out of Date.
This article is out of Date. The most recent book, has been released. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.66.152.100 (talk) 20:12, 30 September 2014 (UTC)

Umm
The article seems to be set up very weird. The summary should be a section too, and there are some things that don't make sense or are phrased weird. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.34.155.29 (talk) 17:05, 26 October 2014 (UTC)

The whole article seems to be written by a teenager who isn't particularly careful about grammar and correctness of vocabulary (e.g. the use of "crush" to mean the human object of infatuation is informal, not appropriate in a scholarly article). I think the whole article should me marked for editorial and grammatical review. SwordAngel (talk) 06:35, 11 August 2020 (UTC)