Talk:Michele Geraci

Quite a bit of polish
This needed quite a bit of work. I had to first work hard to find out how much more work was required.

I exploded the citations to line style because of the amount of Chinese text. Strangely, I once studied Chinese myself for a year, but even so my eyes simply could not navigate the citations inline while making substantive changes.

And if I can't—after my long familiarity with Hanzi text—it's probably a thicket of thorns for most other English editors, too. &mdash; MaxEnt 17:56, 22 March 2020 (UTC)


 * I should also note that primary citations in Mandarin are not entirely kosher here, but good enough for now. &mdash; MaxEnt 17:59, 22 March 2020 (UTC)


 * Also, I'm aware that my new narrative line puts his MBA too much in front, but it makes what follows explicable, so good enough for me. It should be easy enough for the next editor to change the narrative line if desired. &mdash; MaxEnt 18:07, 22 March 2020 (UTC)