Talk:Mickey Micelotta/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 14:47, 4 October 2011 (UTC)


 * The infobox should read (1954–1955)


 * American is a common term, no need for linking


 * New York – Penn League, not New York - Penn League


 * In 1949, Micelotta was promoted to the C-class Vandergrift Pioneers of the Middle Atlantic League. in caps or semicolon, I prefer the latter.


 * ...of the Canadian-American League the following season. His performances that season dull prose


 * As the 1954 season began, the Phillies noted had a good chance at winning a major league roster spot due to manager Steve O'Neill being impressed with his fielding and hitting power. Is "Micelotta" supposed to be after "noted"?


 * Smalley returned from the disabled list perhaps link disabled list


 * He finished the season with only a .201 batting average in 127 games played no need for "only"


 * Perhaps link to BRM in the ELs

Will pass once these issues are dealt with. Albacore (talk) 21:33, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Issues fixed. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 15:51, 7 October 2011 (UTC)