Talk:Microman (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:10, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Going to be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 09:33, 28 May 2020 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "who is working for the Mexican" - works
 * "where their private lives are kept a secret from the wrestling fans." - concealed from wrestling fans.
 * "Microman's debut on April 30, 2017, also marked the debut of the CMLL Micro-Estrellas division," - the first comma is unneeded
 * "despite his diminutive stature of 1.00 m (3 ft 3 1⁄2 in)." - just 1 m will suffice

Personal life

 * "Microman was born on September 30, 1998, in Mexico City, Mexico, son of professional wrestling " - the son
 * "Microman was born on September 30, 1998, in Mexico City, Mexico," - this needs a reliable source to verify the information since The Telegraph does not mention it
 * "(real name not revealed).[4][a]." - the second period is redundant
 * "Growing up he was a big fan of" - idolized is more concise
 * "He initially studied computer sciences" - computer science
 * "in school but gave them up to start training for a professional wrestling career." - stopped to begin

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017–present)

 * "Microman and El Gallito defeated Zacarias and Cuije in the first-ever Micro-Estrellas match at one of CMLL's "Kids' day" shows. [4][6] " - the space between the end of the sentence and both references is unneeded
 * " At 1.00 m (3 ft 3 1⁄2 in) tall," - just 1 m will suffice
 * "In the months following the anniversary" - how many months exactly?
 * Lucha libre should be italized
 * "per lucha libre traditions.[15]With the success of the Micro-Estrellas," - there should be a space between the ref and the start of the second sentence
 * "Chamuel pinned Microman to eliminate him and to win the championship" - the word in bold is redundant

Independent circuit (2017–present)

 * "one of Mexico's larges independent promotions," - typo; should be largest
 * Wikilink Mr. Nibela on his only mention outside the italized show name
 * Zarchias is spelt as Zacarias
 * "For the 2020 Homenaje a Mr. Niebla show on January 4, 2020, Zacarias, dressed like the recently deceased Mr. Niebla, defeated Microman." - Super Luchas does not mention Zacarias defeated Microman dressed like Mr. Niebla. Please find another reliable source that explicitly states this

Reception

 * Wrestling Observer Newsletter, Voices of Wrestling and Súper Luchas should be italized because they are print publications
 * "rookie of the year awards," - Rookie of the Year award
 * CBS news should be wikilinked and "news" must begin with a capital letter