Talk:Micronation/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Fehufanga (talk · contribs) 05:54, 12 February 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I'll be reviewing the article. This is my first GA review.
 * Thank you! I hope you learn a thing or two :)  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 21:28, 12 February 2023 (UTC)


 * @LunaEatsTuna I have left some more comments. —*Fehufangą (✉ Talk · ✎ Contribs) 04:43, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
 * @LunaEatsTuna Looks good! I will pass this. —*Fehufangą (✉ Talk · ✎ Contribs) 09:01, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Though I am a bit confused on where to categorize this under. I'd appreciate some help with that. —*Fehufangą (✉ Talk · ✎ Contribs) 09:10, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I really appreciate the review! I think Political parties and movements might suit it?  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 16:29, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Alright, looks good. —*Fehufangą (✉ Talk · ✎ Contribs) 22:29, 16 February 2023 (UTC)

Prose

 * Micronation as a word has no basis in international law - "International law" is a duplicate link.
 * Removed.


 * and George Cruickshank of the Empire of Atlantium - In both instances, "Empire of Atlantium" is a duplicate link.
 * Removed both.


 * an independent constitutional republic called New Atlantis - "New Atlantis" is a duplicate link.
 * Removed.


 * In 1964, writer Leicester Hemingway - "Leicester Hemingway" is a duplicate link.
 * Removed.


 * based his sovereignty on the Guano Islands Act of 1856 - "Guano Islands Act of 1856" is a duplicate link
 * Removed.


 * engage in intermicronational diplomacy - Diplomacy is a replink
 * Removed.


 * The study of micronationalism is known as micropatriology or micropatrology. - This doesn't seem like it fits in the section "Legality".
 * You're right—removed.


 * Several intermicronational organisations also exist - No need to link "organisations".
 * Removed.


 * delayed due to the COVID-19 pandemic - "COVID-19 pandemic" is a duplicate link
 * Removed.


 * held at Dangar Island, Sydney - "Dangar Island" and "Sydney" are duplicate links.
 * Removed.


 * "with many country pages [on MicroWiki] longer than those of real nations [on Wikipedia]," - Consider adding a ref for this quotation separately.
 * Good idea; done.


 * They claimed to be the princesses of the historical Sunda Empire - Change the Sunda Empire link (which is actually a link to the micronation), to Sunda Kingdom? I remember when this went viral here a few years ago.
 * Changed. I have heard about this from some Indonesian micronationalists who locally call it the 2020 Indonesian micronations shock.


 * and hosted by the Principality of Aigues-Mortes - "Principality of Aigues-Mortes" is a duplicate link.
 * Removed.


 * The documentary explored various micronations around the world, and included - The comma before "and" should be removed.
 * Removed.


 * off the coast of Scotland, and declared - The comma before "and" should be removed.
 * Removed.


 * various micronations around the world, and included - The comma before "and" should be removed.
 * Removed.


 * do not involve terra nullius, and are not subject - The comma before "and" should be removed.
 * Removed.


 * was founded in 2014, and is run - The comma before "and" should be removed.
 * Removed.


 * I noticed that the information about Hemingway's micronation in the section "Libertarian micronations and seasteading projects: 1964–1972" is repeated in the "Seasteading" section. The former section also has a hatnote that points to the latter.
 * I have revamped the whole section; hopefully it looks better now?

Copyvio

 * Quotation to Collins is cited. There are some unavoidable similarities to book titles, but besides that, no concerns.