Talk:Microorganism/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kostas20142 (talk · contribs) 15:28, 1 October 2017 (UTC)

I will gladly take up and review this article. --Kostas20142 (talk) 15:28, 1 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. take note! Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:24, 1 October 2017 (UTC)

comments

 * File:Spallanzani.jpg requires attention. US pd tag is missing, and the other one is used incorrectly. Please refer to the file for more details.
 * Done.


 * File:Robert_Koch.jpg requires the addition of the appropriate US public domain tag.
 * Done.


 * Eagerwig's copyvio detector reported a suspected violation(see report). Unfortunately I tend to agree that there is a problem mostly with first and second link if the list (3rd is definitely not the case). Even a whole paragraph has been copied from 2nd. Could you check and comment on this??
 * The two sources seem very similar, so probably one copied from the other. Whether they copied us or vice versa I couldn't say, but I have completely rewritten the affected sections just in case. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:36, 1 October 2017 (UTC)


 * "Microorganisms are used for many commercial and industrial production of chemicals, enzymes and other bioactive molecules" → "Microorganisms are used for the production of many commercial and industrial chemicals, enzymes and other bioactive molecules". I think this syntax would be better.
 * Fixed.


 * Food production section mentions everything twice. Was that intentional?
 * Fixed.


 * In soil section is a bit confusing,especially its last sentence. What do you mean that can occur?? Could you rephrase it?
 * Done.