Talk:Mikhail Gorbachev Pizza Hut commercial/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:55, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 23:55, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
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 * Add the "use mdy dates" template so the reference dates are consistent.
 * The infobox title should not be in italics.
 * The "(filmed in October 1997)" note is not necessary for the infobox and should be moved to #Production.
 * "Mikhail Gorbachev with granddaughter Anastasia Virganskaya"

Mikhail Gorbachev

Anastasia Virganskaya "
 * What does "Europe (excluding Russia)" mean?
 * There's also no need to link the locations in the infobox.
 * Because it still exists, all past-tense words (ex. was) should be changed to words such as "is".
 * Infobox says October, lead says November. When was this actually filmed and why isn't it in #Production?
 * Remove the comma after "two men disagree"
 * "for the victory" "of the victory"

Content

 * Is such a long description needed? Following the rules at WP:MOSFILM, don't mention what the characters/people actually say, but provide a small description of the events.

Background

 * "foreign owned" "foreign-owned"
 * "It was the part" "It was part"
 * "others suggests" "others suggest"
 * "Gorbachev assented the under" "Gorbachev assented under"
 * Can the word "assented" be replaced?
 * Is the quote from CNN necessary?

Production

 * Mention when filming took place.
 * "jewellery" "jewelry"
 * "afterwards" "afterward"

Broadcast and reception

 * Combine some of the paragraphs.
 * "by Russian" "by the Russian"

Analysis

 * "a by bystander to" "a bystander to"

Further developments

 * None of this section is related to the commercial so, is it necessary to include it?