Talk:Mikoyan-Gurevich DIS/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Bushranger (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 December 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * A few grammar smoothings are required - for instance, "with service designation MiG-5 was reserved" is rather awkward. The Russian words defining OKO should be italicised, for two examples. Also, the "design and development" section should be subdivided, I believe - the flight testing should be in a seperate section/subsection.
 * All done, I believe.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:13, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * References are accurate and reliable, without OR. While technically meeting the requirement I think the long paragraphs shouldn't be cited just at the end - it's an invitation for later additions to "pretend" to be referenced.
 * My articles may be hijacked later on, but I'll take that risk.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:13, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Fair enough.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Placing this on hold while the above comments are addressed. The Bushranger One ping only 01:28, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Good to go. Nice work. - The Bushranger One ping only 05:21, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Placing this on hold while the above comments are addressed. The Bushranger One ping only 01:28, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Good to go. Nice work. - The Bushranger One ping only 05:21, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Good to go. Nice work. - The Bushranger One ping only 05:21, 1 December 2011 (UTC)