Talk:Milan C. Miskovsky/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 18:03, 16 July 2015 (UTC)

Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 18:03, 16 July 2015 (UTC) More comments later.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 18:18, 16 July 2015 (UTC)
 * External links are good
 * No DABs.
 * Lead is a bit too short. I think you expand it a bit.
 * I would like to see more sources added to the article.
 * Note marriage in the prose and (probably) in the lead.
 * Several hundred prisoners were killed..., "several hundred" should be replaced with "two hundred" because it said 1,400 men were sent to Cuba and 1200 were imprisoned.
 * Link Cuba, lung cancer, CIA, espionage, and Soviet Union.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 18:34, 16 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Comment:I’ve expanded the introduction, added two sources, added a section about Miskovsky’s marriage in the article, corrected the law school title, clarified the number of Cuban insurgents killed and added wikilinks as appropriate. Spirit of Eagle (talk) 07:10, 18 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Few more comments:
 * 3 DAB links to: Georgetown, Treasury Department, and Holy Trinity Catholic Church✅-Did myself
 * Any second words in a header are lowercase, per MOS:HEADER✅--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:42, 18 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Passing, well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 17:46, 18 July 2015 (UTC)