Talk:Military career of Keith Miller/GA1

GA Review
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 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Its definitely passable. Just some comments:


 * 1) Can you give a caption to the lead pic?
 * 2) Move some images to the left, maybe?
 * 3) Solve some of the red links?

Good job though. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 14:49, 18 January 2009 (UTC)


 * A few more things, mostly Manual of Style stuff. The last sentence in the first paragraph of the lead does not have a period, for instance (after "Returned From Active Service Badge"). Links should not be bold. And, Notes goes before References. Gary King  ( talk ) 14:56, 18 January 2009 (UTC)