Talk:Military history of Asian Americans/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: North8000 (talk · contribs) 14:33, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

I'm starting a review of this article. North8000 (talk) 14:33, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

Review discussion
I ran into various small items but was able to tweak them myself. North8000 (talk) 00:31, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

GA criteria final checklist
Well-written Factually accurate and verifiable Broad in its coverage Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute Illustrated, if possible, by images
 * Meets this criteria sufficiently for Good Article. To go to the next plateau, you might want to seek out and use some sources that get into other overall aspects.  (culture, acceptance, motivation etc. that also make it "flow")   My gut feel that there is a huge amount of facts presented here in a very slightly "choppy" manner.  Not big deal and fine for GA, but that be a nice effort if you want to take it to the "next level" beyond that. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 00:30, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Meets this criteria. North8000 (talk) 00:21, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Meets this criteria. Suppifiently broad and comprehensive to mee GA criteria.    See "Well written" section for a few suggestion if you care to take it to the next level.   North8000 (talk) 00:30, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Meets this criteria. North8000 (talk) 12:47, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Meets this criteria. North8000 (talk) 14:16, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Meets this criteria.  Article has 17 images.  All are free, so no article-specific use rationales are required. North8000 (talk) 11:08, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Result
This has passed as a Wikipedia Good Article. Congratulations! What an immense about of interesting material has been included in this article! North8000 (talk) 00:36, 25 June 2013 (UTC) Reviewer