Talk:Milk (The 1975 song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) --K. Peake 20:57, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Soon --K. Peake 20:57, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "English band the 1975 originally" → "English band the 1975, originally" ✅
 * "It was written by" → "The song was written by" ✅
 * "The band produced" → "The 1975 produced" ✅
 * "the track served as" → "the song served as" ✅
 * "and is characterised by its extensive use of guitars. The track's lyrics" → "The song is characterised by its extensive use of guitars, while the lyrics" since the characterisation flows better when merged with this in a sentence ✅
 * " It has since become" → "The song has since become" ✅
 * "during a charity show" → "during a February 2019 charity show" for proper context ✅

Composition and release

 * Retitle to Background and composition; I will tell you where to move the info around ✅
 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Remove wikilink on the 1975 ✅
 * The part of the second sentence from "representing the last two minutes" onwards should be moved to being part of the comp info ✅
 * "of the 1975's debut album." → "of The 1975." since you have already introduced the album as being eponymous ✅
 * The vinyl and remaster releases should be directly after the above info, plus move comp to its own para because there will be enough sentences once you have added the representation part. ✅
 * Should guitar-heavy really be in speech marks? ✅
 * "two minutes and thirteen seconds." → "2 minutes and 13 seconds." per MOS:NUM on comparative values
 * While MOS:NUM is not one of the five MoS pages that fall under GA criteria, the section on comparative values states: "Comparable values should be all spelled out or all in figures".  Gia co bbe  talk 11:58, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah that is reasonable, also sorry if I was being too fussy. --K. Peake 19:47, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I appreciate the thoroughness! It's like a review and copy-edit all in one shot.  Gia co bbe  talk 20:23, 13 June 2021 (UTC)


 * The writers/producers sentence should be the one before the lyrical content ✅
 * Remove pipe on A-side ✅
 * "since it makes" → "since the limited pressing makes" ✅
 * Pipe music streaming to Streaming media ✅
 * The remaster release date is not directly sourced ✅

Critical reception and promotion

 * "from contemporary music critics, and has gained" → "from contemporary music critics and has since gained" due to the source's date ✅
 * The Post does not really violate WP:RSSM, as this is only used for reception
 * "about cocaine", and listed it" → "about cocaine" and listed it" ✅
 * "during a charity show for" → "in the middle of a charity show for" ✅
 * "and said the audience's reaction" → "going on to say the audience's reaction" ✅

Credits and personnel

 * Should the pipes to the 1975 from the members be kept when the band itself is wikilinked in this section? If they are kept, pipe Matthew Healy to their article instead since his page has been merged and if not, remove any pipe altogether. ✅

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; got through this quite quickly! --K. Peake 19:47, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed all of your comments. Let me know if there's anything I've missed  Gia co bbe  talk 20:24, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, added in a slight copy edit to the lead but everything else was executed greatly on your part! --K. Peake 07:38, 14 June 2021 (UTC)