Talk:Million Dollar Maybe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ebe123 (talk · contribs) 11:27, 15 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Short review
 * References 1, 2, and 10 are dead
 * "Million Dollar Maybe" should be in italics, not "in quotation marks"
 * 1 million should have currency prefix (USD)

Plot

 * "Favorite CD" is not specified in the episode.
 * "cousin" should be capitalized, as a prefix
 * "it" should be specified since it could mean other things.
 * 1st paragrafe should be trimmed, as it does go in unessesary detail such as the last sentence.

Production

 * Same thing with Million Dollar Abie, italics, not in quotation marks

Reception

 * Found none

Discussion
I'm putting this on hold for 3 days. There is not alot, so a shorter grace period is in order. Can go up to 7 days on request.
 * Should be good now. :) —DAP388 (talk) 23:15, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

-- Beloved Freak  13:55, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Just a couple of comments from an uninvolved editor
 * "Million Dollar Maybe" should not be in italics; per the MOS, episode titles should be in quoatation marks (see ITALICS)
 * Disagree that currency needs to be any more specific than $. WP:CURRENCY advises being specific when the context is unclear. Although not explicit, I'd argue that the lead makes it clear enough that the context is the US, and changing $ → US$ would add unnecessary clutter. Just my opinion, but either way, it's not covered by the GA criteria.
 * "cousin" shouldn't be capitalised in English as it is a common noun, unless you are reading it as "cousin" being part of her name/title, in which case surely it should be "... do a singing toast at Cousin Valerie's wedding"? It's comparable to "... do a singing toast at his mother Valerie's wedding."
 * Promoted  Ebe 123   → report ← Contribs 10:31, 16 November 2011 (UTC)