Talk:Million Reasons/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:31, 4 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * backed by guitar and piano → This does not fit well in the sentence and you can leave it out for the lead
 * making it a positive message song → making it a song with a positive message
 * The music video was directed → An accompanying music video for "Million Reasons" was directed
 * and it continues from → remove "it"
 * and by Grateful Dead's Bob Weir → remove "and by"

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Background and release

 * introduced Gaga and Lindsey → introduced Gaga to Lindsey
 * Link "old school"

Recording and composition

 * Sample > An 19 second sample → A 19-second sample
 * Sample > The lyrics also illustrate the romantic heartbreak and religious faith of the singer in them → The lyrics also showcase the romantic heartbreak and religious faith of the singer.
 * Hillary Lindsey → Unlink her here and write her full name and link her in the first section
 * BloodPop did the additional → use "handled" here
 * rhythm track, string → rhythm track and string
 * Who is GenPop
 * with a tempo of approximately → with its tempo swinging around
 * link "beats per minute"
 * Her vocals span → use "The singer's" here
 * Roberts theorized that like most → comma before "like"

Critical reception

 * generally positive reviews → ... from music critics
 * potential appeal to "Daddy Lessons" also → ...Lessons" as well
 * Write "Idolator" in italics
 * and claimed that it is simple and sweet → and found it was simple and sweet
 * nature of the track was also suited with current American radio → remove "also" as you have it already in the sentence

Chart performance

 * Unlink "promotional single"
 * her first to achieve that → her first to achieve such ranking
 * achieved peaks of numbers 17 and 5 → achieved peaks of numbers 17 and five
 * The top-ten placement in the → ...top ten...
 * Link "Applause"
 * one million digital copies in the US → write out to "United States"
 * performance of the song in The X Factor → the correct preposition here is "at"
 * it debuted at number 107 according to the SNEP → remove "the"
 * was the ninth highest entry → was the ninth-highest entry
 * her highest peak in the latter → ...country

Music video

 * The music video for "Million Reasons" → An accompanying music video for "Million Reasons"
 * Unlink "music video"
 * on December 14, 2016, afternoon → no comma
 * After that her crew comes → After that—in the music video—her crew comes (to clarify)
 * rather made the video about → but rather focused

Live performances

 * A toned down performance → A stripped-down performance
 * Following week after the performance → The following week...
 * The next performance of the song happened at the 2016 → use "occured" here
 * The singer began her UK promotion → ... her promotion of Joanne in the United Kingdom
 * to the country's, following → to the United States following

Cover versions

 * and uploaded on her Instagram → and uploaded it on her Instagram
 * The performance was appreciated with the judges → comma before "with"

Track listing and formats

 * You should include the original digital download of the song
 * Remove "and formats" from the section's title as it's only one format: digital download

Credits and personnel

 * Credits adapted from Joanne liner notes. → past this at the top and write it like this: Credits adapted from the liner notes of Joanne.

Charts

 * Flawless ;)

Certifications

 * Flawless ;)

Release history

 * Flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 50.3% is too much! Several sources have been over-used; please remove some content from the top citations.

Media

 * The media and images appear stable ;)

Outcome

 * Good job with the article. I put it for 7 days. Good luck editing and best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:32, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Starting this today. Thanks for waiting. — I B  [ Poke  ] 14:14, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
 * I believe all is addressed. Thanks for waiting so patiently with my delays. — I B  [ Poke  ] 13:27, 14 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 14:43, 14 October 2017 (UTC)