Talk:Mills Novelty Company

GA Review

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
 * 1) It is stable.
 * 2) It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
 * a (tagged and captioned): b lack of images (does not in itself exclude GA):  c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
 * 1) Overall:
 * a Pass/Fail:
 * a Pass/Fail:

All right here is my review. The article needs some work, but I think it can make it. First of all the history section contains alot of WP:PROSELINE. I would like it if that would go. Second, you need some more sources especially in the "Mills Violano-Virtuoso" section. The trivia section has to be incorporated and not on its own. You might want to include a little more info as well. I no it is a lot, but this is what needs to be done. -- Tλε Rαnδom Eδιτor  ( tαlk ) 23:21, 25 August 2007 (UTC)


 * Upon closer look, you were right to request all the changes. I will not be able to make all of them.  However,
 * the history section contains alot of WP:PROSELINE - I did a little to move the family section out, but thats about it.
 * you need some more sources especially in the "Mills Violano-Virtuoso" section - You are correct. Someone will get to it, but not me not now.
 * The trivia section has to be incorporated. ✅
 * You might want to include a little more info. - Could help, but again nmnn.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 00:01, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
 * NOTICE - I will post this on the WP:CHICOTW discussion board and hope someone wants to take over from here. Please give us our full seven days.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/tcfkaWCDbwincowtchatlotpsoplrttaDCLaM) 00:03, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
 * As agreed I gave you a extra two days from my initial review to make up for the time you did not see the article's review. There is still a lot of proseline, and a fair amount of unsourced info. Unfortunately, I have to fail it. Sorry. -- Tλε Rαnδom Eδιτor  ( tαlk ) 19:28, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

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