Talk:Milutin Bojić/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:52, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Happy to review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:52, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written. Just a few comments:  Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 17:00, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * In "Last years and death",  he received a months' leave Should it be "month's"?
 * Fixed.


 * In the same section, One evening in September 1917...he developed a heavy cough This part could be briefer.
 * Can you be more specific please? Which sentences exactly?
 * I mean the part in whole. I think it could be shortened to a line.
 * Now?
 * Better. Perhaps I felt we were going into some unnecessary detail. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 May 2016 (UTC)


 * In "Influences and themes", can we add "Irish writer" before "Oscar Wilde"?
 * Don't see why not.

That should be it. No copyvio detected, no dablinks, images are properly licensed.


 * Thanks for grabbing the nomination. It had been up for months with no takers. Best, 23 editor (talk) 23:33, 18 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Sorry it had to wait so long. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 00:26, 19 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Alright, now ready for promotion. Cheers! Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 May 2016 (UTC)