Talk:Milwaukee Cold Storage Co. Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 22:41, 1 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Happy to review this one. Bruxton (talk) 22:41, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

Questions

 * can you combine the sentence which is all lone in the lead?
 * in Background - "The building sits" may be too colloquial for an encyclopedia
 * Building is repeated in the lead sentence, also "building which was" and change which to "that"
 * History - "minimize loss " should add a determiner like "the" before loss
 * "Menomonee River in order to cool the building" change "in order to" to just "to"
 * Completed these and I also added a citation for the note. Lightburst (talk) 00:58, 2 March 2024 (UTC)