Talk:Min Young-hwan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 23:04, 25 September 2022 (UTC)

I will be quick-failing this good article nomination, as it is a long way from meeting criterion 1 of the good article criteria. The prose is not "clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience with correct spelling and grammar"—there are numerous extremely long paragraphs, the prose is of poor quality with many grammatical errors (notably a lack of understanding of tenses) and a superfluity of repetitive statements in the form of "On [insert date], Min was [insert political action] as [insert political position], etc. Furthermore, it does not comply with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, or words to watch. I would recommend a visit to the Guild of Copy Editors should the nominator desire GA status, along with numerous other improvements. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:04, 25 September 2022 (UTC)