Talk:Minda de Gunzburg Center for European Studies

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for this article. Who is Minda de Gunzburg? The article should answer this question.

—Alalch E. 17:36, 14 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the question. I added a section "Name" and explained it. Topjur01 (talk) 18:15, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Great, thank you. Now, would you kindly reduce the MOS:PEACOCK-type verbiage (the center has fostered interdisciplinary scholarship, focusing on the intricate social, political, historical, and cultural dimensions of Europe ... furthered its educational mission ... played a pivotal role in) down to the level of balanced and dispassionate encyclopedic prose (composed from mundane, straight-shooting, words and phrases, so no "fostered" [try x conducts y], no "focusing" [does it do something important in addition to what it is "focusing" on?], no "intricate ... dimensions" [maybe politics, history, and culture of Europe?], no "played a pivotal role" [try x did y] Thanks in advance. If you need any help, I'm here.—Alalch E. 18:32, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Forgot to ping you in the previous comment.—Alalch E. 18:42, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for warning me about the Peacock-type text. I reduced the peacock-type verbiage. Let me know if I should remove more or it, or please do it yourself. If you agree with the text, or after you remove it, can you remove the Peacock notification? Topjur01 (talk) 20:12, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I've removed it. Thank you. There's always room for progress, of course. —Alalch E. 20:21, 14 September 2023 (UTC)