Talk:Mindful (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 09:00, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * You don't need to link "studio album"
 * Unlinked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * It revolves → It lyrically revolves
 * Revised in a slightly different way. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * and her album release party → and at her album release party
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Less Issues Than Vogue here ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Release and composition

 * Eric Dawkins, Eric Cire → Eric Dawkins and Eric Cire
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * You should mention the label for its promotional release
 * Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Again, don't link "studio album"
 * Unlinked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * the first song on the album → the record's opener
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * The instrumental is provided by a "funky guitar line" → The song contains a "funky guitar line" in its instrumentation
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Delenda Joseph of Uproxx → start a new sentence here without a semicolon
 * Removed. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * Link "hip-hop"
 * Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * No issues here ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

 * for "Mindful" was released on March 10, 2017 through → replace "through" with "on"
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)


 * More Issues Than Vogue; the other three are → More Issues Than Vogue along with
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Flawless ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Flawless ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Release history

 * Flawless ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Copy-violation

 * 9.1% is very good!
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Outcome

 * Wow, this article was nearly flawless... Congrats on all your work! I put this  for 7 days to allow your edits. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:57, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for all of the help! I believe that I have addressed all of your comments. Hope you are having a wonderful new year so far! 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! I don't want to sound odd, but maybe you have time for one of my GANs? Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)