Talk:Mindful Yoga/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)

I'll take this one too. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * You are busy! Many thanks again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:00, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I finally got some time off due to lockdown so why not :D Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 13:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Is it necessary to have those citations in the lead? At least not ref. 3.
 * Removed ref 3.


 * Paras 1 and 2 would look better if combined
 * Done.


 * Is it 'Mindful Yoga' or 'mindful yoga'? The article is not consistent on this.
 * Fixed.


 * In Origins, we need a link or introduction for Patanjali
 * Linked.


 * eight limbs of Patanjali's yoga What are those?
 * Reworded.


 * The link in ref. 8 is not working
 * Just checked, it's fine but registration is required.
 * Oops I meant ref. 7. I can see ref. 8 no issues Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 14:05, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Updated URL.


 * Page numbers/ranges needed for many refs
 * Added for Cushman, but the others are just links to the books listed.

That's all I see. No duplinks, dablinks or copyvio concerns. Really interesting read, especially as I am interested in Hinduism and yoga. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 13:34, 18 April 2020 (UTC)
 * All issues resolved. Happy to promote :) Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 14:22, 18 April 2020 (UTC)