Talk:Minot, North Dakota/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 04:15, 16 June 2010 (UTC) After reviewing this article, I notice the following issues:
 * The article has very few citations. Ideally at least one cite per paragraph would be needed, so for a city that would be a pretty sizeable amount, certainly more than 10.
 * Along with the above, the citation needed tag needs to be addressed.
 * There needs to be better overall structure. Right now there's a lot of one and two sentence paragraphs that needed to be meshed together.
 * I'm noticing some sentence fragments, i.e. "Minot Vistas of the North Dakota American Legion Baseball League" <-- for that matter, the sports note can just be combined with the recreation section.
 * "Minot It is almost entirely land; the Souris River, its oxbow lakes, and a few creeks take up just 0.14% of the city's total landmass." Remove the It.

It's a very solid start to the article so far, and I would consider it deserving of B-class, which it's at now. It needs much more work before becoming a GA though, so for now I have to fail it. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:15, 16 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Well, I've begun work on most of that. I also have expanded the section with the Minot Vistas fragment Iam  cool  234  17:51, 16 June 2010 (UTC)