Talk:Miss Calypso/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: H1nkles (talk · contribs) 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

When I do an article review I like to provide a Heading-by-Heading breakdown of suggestions for how to make the article better. It is done in good faith as a means to improve the article. It does not necessarily mean that the article is not GA quality, or that the issues listed are keeping it from GA approval. I also undertake minor grammatical and prose edits. After I finish this part of the review I will look at the over arching quality of the article in light of the GA criteria. If I feel as though the article meets GA Standards I will promote it, if it does not then I will hold the article for a week pending work. H1nkles (talk) citius altius fortius 20:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

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Review:


 * I made some grammatical and minor edits to tweak the article a little bit.
 * The only thing that bothered me was the use of the word "gigged". I find it a bit informal.  That certainly isn't enough to keep it out of GA contention but I thought I'd mention it.
 * Overall I thought the writing was well done. The information covered the subject and it was balanced.
 * Refs are formatted ok and links are good.
 * I checked the image and a fair use tag is applied.
 * I will pass this article to GA, thank you for your contributions to the encyclopedia. H1nkles (talk) citius altius fortius 00:17, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I appreciate the pass, thanks. I'm embarrassed to admit that the section containing "gigged" was added by another editor, and it got past me.  My inclination is to cut it, but I'll do some looking around for the Variety source and see if it's valid, most likely tomorrow. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 04:35, 10 July 2013 (UTC)