Talk:Mississippi Highway 308/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Claiming for today.  Sounder Bruce  13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)


 * Comments


 * "United States" (or an abbreviation) should be worked into the first sentence
 * Fine. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * A mention of the county (and its rural nature) should appear
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "North" and "east of Dubbs" should be moved further apart; perhaps like this: "It then turned north near the community of Dubbs" and ended at MS 4 near White Oak.
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Put the gravel road before its designation (as I assume this is chronological).
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "All of the route" would sound better as "The entire route"
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "the intersection" should be "an intersection"
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "travels" should be "traveled", unless you're talking about the current road, in which case it should be spelled out ("Dubbs Road travels")
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Unincorporated community sounds more human
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "at its intersection" should be "at an intersection"
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "as a gravel road" should be "using an existing gravel road within Tunica County connecting US 61 to MS 4"
 * Done. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Who maintains the roads now?
 * Added. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * References check out, but I would love something from a non-DOT/map source.
 * Newspapers.com showed nothing. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

That's it. Good work.  Sounder Bruce  13:50, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I tried my best. Nova Chrysalia   (Talk)  14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good to go. Passing.  Sounder Bruce  14:29, 19 October 2018 (UTC)