Talk:Mississippi Highway 500/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 03:38, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

Will do later tonight or tomorrow.  Sounder Bruce  03:38, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

Comments

 * Lead
 * Any reason the map using an orange highlight instead of a red one?
 * No. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * The second sentence in the lead is quite short, I suggest merging it into the first part of the next sentence.
 * Made a few changes. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "paved in asphalt"...should it be "with"?
 * Fixed. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Route description
 * Shouldn't the traffic count be placed after the route description?
 * I've seen people ask me before to put it as the first thing in the section, so I'll leave it here. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * I suggest mentioning that MS 487 intersects MS 13 at the north end of Lena
 * Added. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Combine the Lyle Street and Ealy Road sentences
 * Done. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "Large forest" is kind of strange, I suggest "forested area"
 * Yeah, much better. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Are all these little intersections that notable? This can be slimmed down a bit.
 * I only mentioned the ones where the road travels in a different direction. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "Crosses a small bridge over Sweetwater Creek" should be "crosses Sweetwater Creek [on a small bridge]" (the last part is optional and wholly redundant)
 * Done. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * An unincorporated area really can't have a "center", I suggest using the name Tuscola instead.
 * Done. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "and beyond" to where?
 * Added. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * History and the rest
 * "helping with connecting Lena" → "helping connect Lena to MS 35"
 * Changed. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Being "published in the state map" isn't notable and shouldn't be attributed in this way
 * Removed. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "The road was in the process of being paved" should be changed to "Paving of MS 500 began in 1961"
 * Done. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * "and the remaining" should be "and the remainder" or "and the remaining segments"
 * Changed to "remainder." Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)


 * No need to add a reference in the Major intersections prose (also it gets spaced out by the template)
 * Removed, but I think it's a bug in jcttop.


 * References look good.
 * I suggest removing the External links section if there's nothing to put there.  Sounder Bruce  22:51, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)

All fixes made. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  23:07, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing.  Sounder Bruce  23:14, 4 June 2018 (UTC)