Talk:Mississippi Highway 572/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 18:29, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

I will review this. YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:29, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * " It ended at MS 569 south of Beechwood. MS 572 was designated in 1957, from MS 24 and MS 33 to MS 569." MS573 is a redlink. YE Pacific  Hurricane
 * I think you mean MS 569, and I'm going to create that article later.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 19:17, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * "The route then traveled down Park Road until it left Wilkinson County" change "left" to "exited". YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:39, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 19:17, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * "After crossing the county line, MS 572 intersected MS 24 and MS 33, and the road became Lower Centreville Road.[1]" "road became [crap no one cares about] road" is weird. Revise it to "After crossing the county line, MS 572 intersected MS 24 and MS 33, and MS572 was also branded Lower Centreville Road.[1]". YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:39, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 19:17, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * "It left Centreville after the intersection, and the route continued eastward. The route crossed over Beaver Creek and entered into the village of Olio.[3] " to "Continuing eastward, the route exited Centerville and crossed over Beaver Creek and emerged into the village of Olio.[3]"
 * Beaver Creek and Olio are articleless. YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:39, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Links removed.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 19:17, 20 April 2014 (UTC)


 * MS569 appear as a redlink, not once, but twice. YE Pacific  Hurricane 18:39, 20 April 2014 (UTC)
 * See my first comment.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 19:17, 20 April 2014 (UTC)