Talk:Mississippi Highway 612/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cameron11598 (talk · contribs) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Will start shortly --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:40, 3 January 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Good work just a few minor things to correct.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * See comments
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * are there any images available that would improve the article?
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Good luck improving the article!
 * are there any images available that would improve the article?
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Good luck improving the article!

Comments
--Cameron11598 (Talk) 00:05, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
 * The start of the route description section could be worded better to make the topic clearer.
 * "At Red Creek Church Road, MS 612 travels southeast and into a larger forest"
 * Not sure you need the "and"
 * "small forest" "larger forest" (in the route description section)
 * Which forests?
 * History Section
 * MS 612 was established in 1966, and it was part of a construction project in 1967, with a total cost of $611,248
 * Almost seems like a run-on sentence could probably be separated for better flow.
 * The route has not been changed significantly since.[9][10]
 * Sentence Fragment

Fixed all of them I think. The forest doesn't have a name. It's just a group of trees.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 23:52, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks good! --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:54, 4 January 2017 (UTC)