Talk:Missouri Route 126/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Admrboltz (talk · contribs) 01:19, 20 January 2014 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * No images illustrating article, but that's ok.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * No images illustrating article, but that's ok.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead and Route Description

 * "Its western terminus is at the Kansas state line where it continues as K-126." - The highway's terminus is at the line but the highway continues?
 * Clarified.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 03:55, 20 January 2014 (UTC)


 * "Its eastern terminus is at US 160 in Golden City, sharing it with Route 37." - repetitive sentence structure, also confusing.
 * Fixed.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 03:55, 20 January 2014 (UTC)


 * "...a few trees. After the route intersects Route J, trees clear up..." - awkward phrasing regarding the woodlands.
 * Removed "trees clear up".&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 03:55, 20 January 2014 (UTC)


 * "...vehicles travel on the road daily, on average." - awkward phrasing. See examples on some of my articles on how I handle AADT. --  Admr Boltz  01:33, 20 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Better?&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 03:55, 20 January 2014 (UTC)

History

 * You are violating a lot of Using maps and similar sources in Wikipedia articles in your history. You have to be very careful when citing maps for history. Review the "original research" section of this essay in particular.
 * Okay, I added more maps, and will change some parts of the wording soon.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 03:42, 20 January 2014 (UTC)