Talk:Mistakes (Tove Styrke song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:00, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

I will go through this now! --K. Peake 11:00, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after third studio album
 * "The song was released as" → "It was released as" and swap this with the inspiration sentence
 * ""Mistakes" received critical acclaim, with music critics commending its" → ""Mistakes" received acclaim from music critics, who commended its"
 * Mention that the certification was in Sweden
 * "the idea of perfection. The video includes references to the 1999 film Runaway Bride" → "the idea of perfection and references to the 1999 film Runaway Bride are included"
 * Mention the awards ceremony performance at the end of the lead

Background and release

 * "wrote "Mistakes" with" → "co-wrote "Mistakes" with"
 * "the song, and the structure of the chorus was altered several times before" → "the song and the structure of the chorus was altered several times, before" with the pipe
 * ""Finding those special" → ""And finding those special" per the source
 * "designed the artwork for the "Mistakes" single," → "designed the artwork for "Mistakes","
 * Remove "of the cover" from the end of the sentence, however the some releases are not sourced
 * Pipe VAX to VAX (band) per MOS:LINK2SECT

Composition and lyrics

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * ""Mistakes" is a" → "Musically, "Mistakes" is a"
 * "as she sings "You make me" → "as she sings "you make me"
 * "complements the lyric" → "complements the line"
 * "into the hook "You" → "into the hook "you"

Reception

 * "received widespread praise from music critic." → "was met with widespread praise from music critics."
 * Idolator should not be italicised
 * "Day commented, "It's" → "Day commented that "it's"
 * "bursts from Styrke."" → "bursts from Styrke"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "called it "fantastic"," → "called the song "fantastic",
 * "streams in the country." → "streams in Sweden."

Music video

 * Img looks good!
 * "Joanna Nordahl directed the accompanying music video for" → "Joanna Nordahl directed the music video for"
 * "to her, "It was fun to" → "to her and "it was fun to"
 * "stating that "We ended up" → "stating that they "ended up"
 * "of the 'perfect woman'."" → "of the 'perfect woman'"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "in late-August 2017 on" → "in late August 2017 on"
 * Remove the comma after Visby Ladies
 * "that "It's this romantic theme" → "that "it's this romantic theme"
 * "on 4 October 2017 on Styrke's" → "on 4 October 2017, via Styrke's"
 * "She continues to run" → "Styrke continues to run"
 * The quote she "told The Fader" is not sourced

Live performances

 * "She also included" → "Styrke also included"

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * The citations do not back up various releases

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; that met my target time! --K. Peake 13:36, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed all the issues now. Thanks for the review :) Pancake (talk) 20:34, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, good job on this and kudos for a quick response! --K. Peake 07:09, 1 February 2023 (UTC)