Talk:Mister Monday

Confusing
Having never read the book, I find the plot summary very confusing. It should be rewritten to be more objective. Perhaps describe the overarching plot of the book, rather then a play by play. 108.202.194.109 (talk) 15:33, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Untitled
we should have the canadien book cover it's way nicer and it would show a bit more difrence in covers —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jamhaw (talk • contribs)

I think some information on the Sleepy Plague, should be added since it's important to the plot and since the article doesn't mention why Arthur entered the House in the first place.

--CmaccompH89 04:54, 23 August 2006 (UTC)


 * No, the literary significant edition is the 1st and that is what should be included as part of the infobox. :: Kevinalewis  :  (Talk Page) / (Desk)  14:38, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

solution
The solution to the main problem of the story is never mentioned. Some detail should be spent describing the Nightsweeper. --CmaccompH89 17:41, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

As far as I can tell, very little about what happens after Arthur enters the house has been included at all. Could someone put it in? Strdst grl (talk) 16:19, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 00:13, 30 April 2016 (UTC)