Talk:Mitsu Dan

Date of birth
, her date of birth is mentioned in the lead (is it referenced?) but just her year of birth in the infobox, needs to be consistent. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:52, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Probably best to put year only in the lead. Birth year is mentioned in several of her bios in the article's linked sources. Bakazaka (talk) 18:25, 1 September 2018 (UTC)

Lead
One sentence is not sufficient to adequately summarise the key points of this article. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:50, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Can you be more specific about which key points are not adequately summarized? Bakazaka (talk) 19:00, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * What actually makes her notable, for instance. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * So, for example, "She has played multiple lead roles in television and film, including Naoko in the 2013 erotic thriller Amai Muchi, for which she received a Newcomer Prize at the 37th Japan Academy Prize ceremony." Something like that? Bakazaka (talk) 19:08, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Bingo! The Rambling Man (talk) 19:09, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. Thanks for the help. Bakazaka (talk) 19:21, 1 September 2018 (UTC)
 * No worries, thanks for your nice article and good edits. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:24, 1 September 2018 (UTC)