Talk:Miwa Matreyek

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jamaistroptard. Peer reviewers: Sivan 99, Southerngothics.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 01:08, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review Edit
This was a very interesting article and a unique choice to do your assignment on. You have a lot of facts on the filmmaker's methods and pieces that they have made. This adds substance and validity to the article as well as the filmmaker's credibility. My main advice is that I would be careful in some of the sentences you have which position her work in a non-neutral way, also claims which do not necessarily have facts to back them up. Specifically, "Two years later, in 2009, Matreyek's work was globally praised with the release of a short film that will change her career, Panorama City (2009)." How did this change her career? What was its importance? Answering these questions would help validate this claim. As well, elaborating a bit more on some of the general themes of her works as opposed to her focusing more on her awards and accolades, (albeit important!) would give more nuance to the article and Matreyek as a filmmaker. All in all, a really interesting article to read and I think you'll do well, you captured my interest in this filmmaker! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sivan 99 (talk • contribs) 04:50, 5 November 2019 (UTC)