Talk:Moath Al Qadi

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Thank you for asking me to review your draft.

At this point, the editorial style for biographies is not really respected. I recommend that you read Manual of Style/Biography and make the changes that would be suitable. For example, the short introduction at the top does not follow the guidelines (we need full sentences etc.)

I also advise that you double check on Notability (people) to make sure that he is within the requirements. But even if he is, the style needs to be improved before an inclusion on Wikipedia be envisioned. Currently, it rather looks like a draft.

Thank you ! Anthere (talk) 02:56, 1 December 2022 (UTC)


 * I have made the appropriate changes and the advice given to me,thx. Mona rami (talk) 12:38, 1 December 2022 (UTC)