Talk:Mobiles for development

Hey there. This is my first Wikipedia article - I'm working on it for a class that is also involved with the Wikipedia Education Program. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to share! --MaryB-INF2165 (talk) 01:11, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

NPOV Fail
Hi MaryB-INF2165. Thank you for your contribution to Wikipedia! Unfortunately this article has some serious problems. It appears to be more a well researched op-ed piece than an encyclopedic article. The tone and wording strongly suggest an agenda or POV which is inconsistent with the objective neutrality required of articles. It needs to be substantively rewritten to comply with Wikipedia standards. Please see WP:PROMO and WP:NPOV. Feel free to drop me a line here or on my talk page if you have any questions. Best regards -Ad Orientem (talk) 21:08, 7 April 2014 (UTC)