Talk:Moby Doll's impact in scientific research

Opening sentence
MOS:REDUNDANCY states: Keep redundancy to a minimum in the first sentence. Use the first sentence of the article to provide relevant information that is not already given by the title of the article. The title need not appear verbatim in the lead if it is descriptive. [...] If the article's title does not lend itself to being used easily and naturally in the first sentence, the wording should not be distorted in an effort to include it. Instead, simply describe the subject in normal English, avoiding unnecessary redundancy. In keeping with that guidance, I think 's edit of the lead sentence was a definite improvement. , would you consider restoring that version of the lead sentence? Schazjmd  (talk)  00:24, 10 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Am doing it, it's a very informative comment, but how much should be bold? Rebecca Beecham Gotzl (talk) 00:43, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
 * @Rebecca Beecham Gotzl, per the MOS examples, none of it should be bold. Schazjmd   (talk)  01:00, 10 November 2023 (UTC)