Talk:Modesta Ávila/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krimuk90 (talk · contribs) 02:36, 14 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * Was her name written as Avila or Ávila?
 * Ávila is official Spanish spelling but most sources refer to her as Avila. ♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:10, 24 August 2014 (UTC)


 * In "Prosecution and imprisonment" "..at the newly opened Orange County Superior Court" should be "..at the then newly opened..."
 * Done.♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:21, 24 August 2014 (UTC)


 * "Her lawyer, George Hayford, himself of dubious standing". The source provided does not mention his name, but says that he was inexperienced and "probably crooked".
 * Direct quote added.


 * Are Ricardo Sánchez, Fred Gómez Carrasco, and Alvaro Luna Hernandez notable enough to have their own articles in the future?
 * Definitely. I had already blue linked a number. I'll try to blue those too. The judge though, nothing on him, will de link.


 * Is sanjuancapistrano.net" a notable enough source? Can we replace this with a better one?
 * I believe so, it seems to be reliable source for local stuff.♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:21, 24 August 2014 (UTC)

Overall, a very interesting read. -- KRIMUK  90  ✉  06:25, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review !♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:21, 24 August 2014 (UTC)


 * One possible problem -- this article seems to confuse the Southern Pacific and Santa Fe Railroads.Cmuncey (talk) 19:27, 5 September 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: -- KRIMUK  90   ✉  10:54, 27 August 2014 (UTC)