Talk:Mohabbatein/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox, Lead

 * The reference for the budget (infobox) has the wrong title.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * This says the budget was ₹190 million, so recite it and change the budget everywhere to ₹120–190 million
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "second-highest grossing" "second-highest-grossing"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add commas after Shah Rukh Khan, Jimmy Shergill, and "Academy Awards".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Plot, Cast

 * In the last paragraph, add commas after "Sameer, Vicky" and "Sanjana, Ishika".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Other than that, the plot passes WP:FILMPLOT and the cast looks good.

Production

 * "highest grossing" "highest-grossing"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "change his mind" "changed his mind"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "made another" "make another"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "a honest" "an honest"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "role as Megha" "role of Megha"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "tree male" "three male"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "specially" "specifically"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Wikilink Screen.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Recite references at the end of each quote.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Change uses of "..." (here and in other sections) to "[...]"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Music

 * Add a comma after Shah Rukh Khan.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Other than that, this section looks good.

Release, Critical reception

 * No issues here.

Accolades

 * Table looks good.

References, External links

 * Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subcription".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add "/reviews" to the Rotten Tomatoes link per Template talk:Rotten Tomatoes.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:03, 1 May 2021 (UTC)