Talk:Mohamad Jawad Chirri

Is this sentence ok to have in a wikipedia article: "It was a great dream that had come true!"? Possibly biased? A. Scholar (Nabu) (talk) 02:15, 5 July 2016 (UTC)

strange phrasing and palpable bias
This sounds translated or is written by a non-native speaker. In addition, it's not neutral, and is written from a point of view of praise rather than objective observation. Mohamad Jawad Chirri may very well be a great man, but it is not the job of an encyclopedia to try to convince people, rather, to give facts and have the readers interpret them. Even the way it starts is suspiciously propagandic... "Like many pioneers through known time..."

It sounds less like an attempt at objectivity and more of a desire to spin or create a narrative. Plus you need to cite some sources. I'm going to try and make this better — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rubecuber (talk • contribs) 23:16, 2 August 2016 (UTC)