Talk:Mohammad Khan Tokhmaq Ustajlu

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Hi. This could do with an infobox. Would you like me to do it, or would you prefer to? Gog the Mild (talk) 14:33, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - Hey! Sure, feel free - go ahead! - LouisAragon (talk) 17:59, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

I know nothing about Safavid naming conventions, but is it correct to refer to him as Tokhmaq Khan rather than Ustajlu?
 * - "Ustajlu" is the name of the tribe he belonged to. Other than in the title and in the first sentence, its not really necessary to add "Ustajlu" throughout the rest of the article. I mean you can do it, but its kinda unnecessary. What I often do myself is kinda alternating between both. So for example, in some sentences "Tokhmaq Khan", whereas "Tokhmaq Khan Ustajlu" in others. But its up to you. I think it looks perfectly fine right now. - LouisAragon (talk) 17:59, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Is there a reason for "Scutari (Constantinople)" rather than just Constantinople? I nearly changed it but thought it best to check. Gog the Mild (talk) 15:24, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - I specifically added Scutari to the article because thats what Matthee (2014) uses as well. - LouisAragon (talk) 17:59, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

What do you think about adding [one of these] as an image? Gog the Mild (talk) 15:30, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * - I just added a pic of Tahmasp I. Should do the trick until we get a pic of Çıldır/Battle of Çıldır. - LouisAragon (talk) 17:59, 1 May 2018 (UTC)