Talk:Mohegan Tribe

Wiki Education assignment: WRIT 1150-26, Writing for Others
— Assignment last updated by Kat1220 (talk) 13:20, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

I am planning on updating this article in the next few weeks. I would like to make the lead section more in line with Wikipedias guidelines, namely by making it more concise and moving some information into the body of the article. I plan on keeping the existing structure of the article and expanding out each section with modern, revelevant information regarding the activities and projects of the tribe throughout the last decade bringing the article a little more up to date. Lastly, I am going to expand out the Vision section of the article and add in further information about cultural aspects of the tribe and how they are implementing their vision through their current work. This will give further insight into the tribe as an individual nation, rather than viewing the tribe in relationship to its surrounding state. Please see my annotated bibliography for further details of my plan: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kat1220/Mohegan_Tribe/Bibliography Kat1220 (talk) 14:07, 15 November 2023 (UTC)