Talk:Mom and Pop Art/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: —  Andrew s talk  23:59, 22 July 2011 (UTC)


 * One dablink found and fixed; please check


 * Plot
 * "Astrid Weller (played by Isabella Rossellini)" - wouldn't 'voiced' be more appropriate?
 * "Homer's exhibit goes to the Louvre: American Style museum and when Mr. Burns buys his work. " - huh?
 * "Consequently, Homer becomes a success" - is this really needed?
 * "Arrivederci Roma" - per MoS, should be in quote marks, not italics
 * "On the Simpsons' garage door, "Start here tomorrow 7/17/95" is written in blue paint. The date refers to Scully and Julie Thacker's anniversary, which was on July 17, 1995" - how is this relevant to the episode?
 * It is only mentioned in this episode. Perhaps it would fit better in Cultural references?
 * Oh. Then stipulate that the writing was only on the garage in this episode. —  Andrew s talk  09:35, 23 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Steven Dean Moore's participation in the DVD commentary is not supported by ref.
 * The DVD Town ref should link the page 2, where this episode's comment is, and indicate  in the citation template.

Nice work, on hold, awaiting improvements. —  Andrew s talk  00:34, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I've answered most of your concerns, and there was only one that I was a bit unsure about. Thanks again! Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:28, 23 July 2011 (UTC)
 * All good, passing now. Congratulations and keep up the good work! —  Andrew s  talk  09:55, 23 July 2011 (UTC)