Talk:Moments (One Direction song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TheSpecialUser (talk · contribs) 08:20, 27 July 2012 (UTC)

Yes!  →TSU tp* 08:20, 27 July 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing AdabowtheSecond (talk) 03:10, 28 July 2012 (UTC)

Are there any issues? AdabowtheSecond (talk) 01:25, 29 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Was not at home since 3 days. Sorry for the delay. There are some minor issues as well as few major ones. I'll give out the complete review in 6 hours. Again, sorry for the delay.  TheSpecialUser TSU 01:28, 29 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Review


 * Split the Charts into 2 seperate sections; Chart performance (containing the details) and Charts (with the chart)
 * Tracklisting - it is a useless section, thus remove it
 * No need of inclusion of ref in the infobox
 * Images need WP:ALT
 * Image in the section Charts' is of no use there. Please either move it to relevant section or remove it
 *  In the United Kingdom, "Moments" debuted on the UK Singles Chart at number 118 on chart issue of 3 December 2011 -> UK is repeating thus remove it
 * ''In Canada, the song debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number 87 on the chart issue of 21 March 2012 -> The song also debuted on the Canadian Hot 100 at number 87 on the chart issue of 21 March 2012
 * One Direction performed the song on their Up All Night Tour (2011–12) - no need of stating the year.
 * "Moments" was written by Ed Sheeran and Si Hulbert, with production handled by Hulbert - "Moments" was written by Ed Sheeran and Si Hulbert, and was produced by Hulbert or "Moments" was written by Ed Sheeran and Si Hulbert. It was produced by Hulbert
 * In an interview, Sheeran stated about the song -> In an interview, Sheeran talking about the song, stated,
 * In April 2012, Sheeran referenced the song in an interview with Dose.ca, how he has a surge of young followers in North America. "It’s weird, in England, I see everything —... - what does this mean? Probably a change to this will fix it: ''In April 2012, Sheeran referenced the song in an interview with Dose.ca, and talked about how he had a surge of young followers in North America. He added that, "It’s weird, in England, I see everything —..."
 * "Moments" is a song by British-Irish boy band One Direction, taken from the deluxe edition of their debut studio album Up All Night (2011) - remove (2011)
 * Start a new paragraph with "Moments" received positive reviews from music critics....
 * Despite not being released as a single, the song charted in lower regions on the singles charts in Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom - you must include something about it in the article later onward, most probably in the Chart section.
 * One Direction performed the song on their first headlining concert tour, the Up All Night Tour (2011-2012) - no need of stating years

 TheSpecialUser  TSU 07:57, 29 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Is everything addressed properly AdabowtheSecond (talk) 13:08, 29 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ? How did this get passed as GA? The article has so many problems, in fact I'm going to be reassessing this. Till I Go Home 07:51, 3 August 2012 (UTC)