Talk:Moments (One Direction song)/GA2

GA Reassessment
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Reassessor:

How this was passed as a Good article is something beyond me.

Issues

 * Infobox—source for songwriter is not needed.
 * Lead—the article is too short to contain 2 paragraphs for the lead.
 * taken from the deluxe edition of their debut studio album Up All Night. --> Year?
 * The song received positive reviews from music critics, praising the song's memorability and compositional structure. --> Past tense to present?
 * Background—In an interview, Sheeran talking about the song, stated, --> Huh? This doesn't make sense. And anyways, what interview?
 * Composition and critical reception—these two sections don't go well together.
 * According to the sheet music published by EMI Music Publishing --> Unnecessary
 * Written in the key of D major; vocal elements range from the note of D4 to A5. --> Awkward prose
 * "Moments" is a pop ballad --> Should be stated earlier in the article
 * What the f*ck makes the 'Sugarscape' and 'Pop & Glory' sources reliable?
 * Charts—add 'sortable'
 * Two pictures is a little much for such a short article.
 * References—every 'work' paramater that isn't a printed source should not be in italics. There's some over-linking going on (e.g. Allmusic, Rovi)
 * This hardly feels like a GA. It's so short.

Overall

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Till 08:03, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I notified the main contributer to the article 10 days ago and they have made no effort to address the issues. As such, I am delisting this as a GA. The article can be renominated any time but I would suggest that the above remaining issues are fixed. Till 00:33, 13 August 2012 (UTC)