Talk:Moments (One Direction song)/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:32, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Thanks for reviewing. &mdash; Robin   (talk)  22:47, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Info box
 * Use Hubert's full name in the Producer parameter
 * Add the previous and next song to the infobox, like on "Homeless" for example.


 * Lead
 * You don't need to say it's from the deluxe edition
 * "The track was not commissioned as a single." → Remove. You don't need to say something if it didn't happen. It's like saying that the song didn't chart in America.
 * "Upon the release of Up All Night, the song charted in lower regions on the singles charts in Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom." → Add somewhere in the sentence that it chart in tese countries due to strong digital download sales. And link digital download.


 * Background and composition
 * Spilt these. They can have their own sections. Then name the Composition section Composition and lyrics.
 * "In a November 2012 interview with MTV News" → In an interview with MTV News in November 2012,


 * Reception
 * Rename to Critical reception
 * I don't see why Sheeran's opinion is in a box quote? Not really sure if it is relevant information to be honest, I don't see how it fits in the article.
 * "whom highlighted its" → whom praised its
 * Unitalicise the lyrics.

"A live performance of the song is featured on the DVD release of the tour." → The song was later included on the DVD release, One Direction: Up All Night – The Live Tour.
 * Live performance


 * Tracklist
 * Remove this section altogether. I notice this was raised in GA/1


 * Charts
 * One table for 2011, one table for 2012, like on "I Got You" for example.


 * References
 * FN1: Link Hearst Corporation
 * FN2: Link The Sun
 * FN4: Link Daily Mail

Go through and check that Capital FM, Roling Stone etc are linked and that MTV is not italicised. On hold. AARON &bull; TALK  23:00, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Did everything. &mdash; Robin   (talk)  03:43, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. AARON &bull; TALK   09:53, 2 January 2013 (UTC)